Metallasmack

By DarkNTormented

row R we were supposed to be
ya right we had to fuckin see
so a little closer we went further from the door
its fuckin metallica we had to be on the floor
on our way there a friend was found
it was smurf it was just bound
to happen
however then i found josh
who ended up bustin his head in the mosh
and then there was god
with the really great bod
on the floor we ended up
after that guy went nutz
and knocked down the guard
then they all followed
to the floor we ran
without a damn wristband
the best night of my life
i wish it didnt have to end
at the best concert with my best friend
it was so fuckin insane,
and "The memory remains!!"

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Copyright 2004 DarkNTormented
Published on Thursday, July 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Great poem luv the part that has to do with metallica rock on! peace

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