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Eraser Dust
By Dekika
Eraser dust,
lying on my desk.
I brush it away
My feelings,
weighing on your heart.
You brush them away.
Eraser dust,
worn down from what it once was.
You replace it.
My love,
barely faltering,
but you replace it.
Eraser dust,
left on the floor.
unnoticed.
My heart,
left cold and alone,
unnoticed.
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Copyright 2004 Dekika
Published on Thursday, May 13, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Eraser Dust"
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A former member wrote:
this is the best of your works that i've read so far. the parallel construction works Very well. nicely done. lot of spirit in few words
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On Monday, May 17, 2004, Anth
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wrote:
i really liked this,the comapirsons you made were really strong, clever and brilliantly written, superb
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On Monday, May 17, 2004, Mute Serenade
(389) wrote:
fast read, but a lovely one.... Sue
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