I've Lost My Way Again

By hopeless

I've diminished upone these many rocks my own heart trapped and
Lost within a desperate body
My own soul knows not the way to the surface and along the
Way becoming more and more unknown to me and
Again i've managed to lead my own self astray

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Copyright 2004 hopeless
Published on Thursday, May 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I to have lost my way but that is where my friends have stepped up to help find a better way of life instead of living in fear of my own shadow.. But this poem has inspired me to step my life up another notch..

  • Anth On Thursday, May 13, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    youve really portrayed that lost feeling so amazingly well here, powerful

  • Lynaes On Friday, May 7, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    I agree with Alanarchy. This was so sad and raw. The last line hit me hard. This is beautiful, hopeless, really beautiful. *hugs* -L

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, May 6, 2004, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    This was short but very powerful. Like a kick in the jaw. I can relate to what your saying here. Great work. I enjoyed. Write on.

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