a light. a voice. a shadow.
By bloody LOVEly
a light. a voice. a shadow.
she flashed the light in front of me
and momentarily i could not see
she flashed the light right in my face
and she began the race for life
who dies first?
who dies last?
who becomes the heroe of our past?
something inside tells me
something i cannot understand
something i cannot comprehend
crack your spine as you run around the bend
break your spine into a million peices
as you try to understand the unexplanable
~*~+GRIM+~*~
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Copyright 2004 bloody LOVEly
Published on Sunday, February 15, 2004.
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On Thursday, June 27, 2019, Alectozere
(23) wrote:
I really like your style ^^ I love this, keep it up!
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On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
love the question & answer style of this piece. cool stuff. :) -MeL-
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A former member wrote:
This is remarkable...fucking fantastic...*applauds*
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On Sunday, May 23, 2004, -Oz-
(134) wrote:
WAAAA i can't understand the unexplainable......lol.....WONDERFUL WRITE! ~oZ~
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, Cwn Annwn
(91) wrote:
It's after me!!! ahhhhh!:::runs in horror:::...woah...freaky write!~GoNe~