Bro/ken Tears
By Chameleon
I just want to scream at the rain sometimes;
the kind of scream that starts in your toes,
then travels upward
through the spinal railroad
up through the deep caverns
of your chest-
then, with a slight shiver
comes the explosion;
an eruption of choir,
shattering the glass beads-
melting them before impact.
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Published on Thursday, May 16, 2002.
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"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, June 5, 2019, Just Dave
(448) wrote:
Nicely done. Short and sweet. JD
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A former member wrote:
Fucking Brilliant
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A former member wrote:
Wow, I'll never hear a scream the same way again. This was beautifully done, you painted the sound of a scream with eloquent words that captured my mind like the strange allure of a Kaleidoscope. I love it!
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A former member wrote:
what I like most about you, is your ability to be real....I felt almost selfish reading this, as though I had tucked down on the shore and read from a more personal journal....but thats poetry right?
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On Friday, August 6, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
short,sweet,and to the point.i won't even bother quoting anything from this one cause it's right there plain as day.very emotive piece.makes me want to try it next time it rains.****-knight
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
mother fucking screamxcore
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A former member wrote:
great poem! with strong feeling
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A former member wrote:
I agree with Mr.Ash It's deep!
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On Monday, February 3, 2003, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
love this piece ... always have .... always will ... thats why your never EVER going to delete it ... oops , i think i accidentaly bookmarked it ... what that means .. much respect