Bro/ken Tears

By Chameleon

I just want to scream at the rain sometimes;
the kind of scream that starts in your toes,
then travels upward
through the spinal railroad
up through the deep caverns
of your chest-

then, with a slight shiver
comes the explosion;

an eruption of choir,
shattering the glass beads-
melting them before impact.

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Published on Thursday, May 16, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Wednesday, June 5, 2019, Just Dave (458)By person wrote:

    Nicely done. Short and sweet. JD

  • A former member wrote: Fucking Brilliant

  • A former member wrote: Wow, I'll never hear a scream the same way again. This was beautifully done, you painted the sound of a scream with eloquent words that captured my mind like the strange allure of a Kaleidoscope. I love it!

  • A former member wrote: what I like most about you, is your ability to be real....I felt almost selfish reading this, as though I had tucked down on the shore and read from a more personal journal....but thats poetry right?

  • knightmirror On Friday, August 6, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    short,sweet,and to the point.i won't even bother quoting anything from this one cause it's right there plain as day.very emotive piece.makes me want to try it next time it rains.****-knight

  • slow.burn.star On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, slow.burn.star (84)By person wrote:

    mother fucking screamxcore

  • A former member wrote: great poem! with strong feeling

  • A former member wrote: I agree with Mr.Ash It's deep!

  • DoctorAsh On Monday, February 3, 2003, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    love this piece ... always have .... always will ... thats why your never EVER going to delete it ... oops , i think i accidentaly bookmarked it ... what that means .. much respect

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