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Ending Credits
By WinterGrave
Dwindle away
a path laid forth
a path lead astray
i marked my words
on my dying day
seek a beginning
a rewound confession
a hope of serenity
in this depression
soul keep me awake
blind my sight
to these eyes
to the look of demise
seek the end
a finish
thats not pretend
cool this feverish mind
look into this darkness
black candle leads the way
down this path lead astray
no end I see
no credits for me
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Copyright 2004 WinterGrave
Published on Friday, April 9, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Ending Credits"
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A former member wrote:
that was pretty amazing i loved it you have got some real talent
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A former member wrote:
wow I really like this...it's interesting to say the very least
it has a strangely attractive feeling about it.
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341)
wrote:
a hauting piece, indeed...-l-
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A former member wrote:
I love the ending of this man. Reminds me of a less than jake song where they mention not having a laugh track. Awsome job man. ~Ship!
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Cinn
(152) wrote:
this is so dark it puts an interesting feeling over you good write
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
I absolutely love this one, the first and last stanzas are my favourite. I love the whole atmosphere.. Discovering there is no end for you, just an infinity of darkness. Amazing work. ~L
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