moonlight insanity
By frost bite
deep glowing whispers ring amongst our ears
driving deeper into thoughts
patterns form inside
seperate matter from the clouds pouring so hard
a dry secret unleashed
biddings untold
fold your tents fabricated lives in the depths
for oceans past still flood our land
understanding still
not a breath to take or drop to sweat
there is nothing left
your now dry
tug harder
a rip across your inner pathways
changing lanes of trust and guilt to what you now own
past thickens
into jelliton molds hardening inside
very thoughts are dangerous venturing into your abyss
don't turn back
it's too bright in here
so bold and new without shame crossing into your lane
shattered paper
striking through cuts
tearing many holes in you from the inside
symphony plays louder and never fades away
old pathways and molds now so far astray
catch up to whats inside you is dead
or is that the thought, the thought you dread
finishing
hasn't
won
one
has to
stop
Comments on "moonlight insanity"
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On Saturday, April 24, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Very catching . ..the meaning of each word just fell on me like raindrops .. "symphony plays louder and never fades away old pathways and molds now so far astray" . ..wonderfully writen in its own dark way.
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A former member wrote:
it took me two times reading it to get a propper feel but well done...one that makes you think
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A former member wrote:
love your choice of words in this piece. nice work.
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
I don't really know what to make of it, can't really consontrait but it is well written...
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
i love it...and plus ur a qt ~slave
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, frost bite
(43) wrote:
right..