It's Raining
By Emma Tenebrae
"It's raining now." She whispered to the empty room.
She listened as the rain fell against the glass of the hospital window.
Smiling, memories of playing, dancing and walking in the rain flooded
her thoughts, her eyes closed against the starkness of her room. The machines
clicked and beeped quietly around her but she shut them out and listened
to the drops of rain.
This was no light shower and she listened to the drops booming against
the window. In the far off distance came the sound of thunder, her smile
widened. Oh how she loved to listen to thunder her body's excited and
electric from the lightning in the air. Boom, boom another loud crash.
Oh how she wished someone would turn off the lights so she could see.
She kept them shut against the intrusive neon lights. She wanted to go
home.
The door swung open and the lights went off.
"Hi Sweets." She whispered her smile growing as wide as she could stretch
it. "You remembered."
"Of course." He sauntered over to the bed where she had lay the last three
weeks. Her body barely alive but her mind ever present.
"Please tell me you have come to take me home."
"Yes love, it is time for you to come home."
"It's raining now. Isn't it wonderful the way Mother Nature promises new
life."
He nodded as he lit her three candles that sat near by on her nightstand
and began moving the equipment out of the way. She watched him mesmerized
by his grace and beauty as he went about his task. Oh how she had missed
him these last ten years. So handsome, so masculine, he had never feigned
in his promise to take care of her. She always knew when it was time to
go home that he would come for her.
She tilted her head as if she heard shadows in the room.
"Pay no attention to anything but me my love." He put out his hand for
her to grasp and she rose to a sitting position on the edge of the bed.
"Care to dance."
She listened to the music the rain and thunder now played as she slipped
onto her feet, renewed like a flower after a spring shower. "I would love
to." She replied as he gathered her into his arms and pressed his lips
to hers. Her body melted as it always had when he embraced her this way.
"Shall we dance all the way home?" His eyes smiled, "Everyone is waiting
to see you."
As they began to waltz she caught a glimpse of the room as they whirled
away to the symphony of rain. There was a hustle and bustle of hospital
personnel the machines with their clicks and beeps were now silent. On
the bed she saw herself and she cried out to her lifeless shell, her voice
brimming with joy and laughter. "I am going home, I am finally going home."
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Comments on "It's Raining"
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On Wednesday, December 9, 2020, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
Good stuff. I enjoyed this because it made me think. Very inspirational in thought. Thank you for sharing and congrats on poem of the day. :)
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A former member wrote:
i almost new from the beginning how this would end but i have to admit that it really gave me the chills. you should be proud of this work. beautiful. thanks //ae
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Beautiful and intriguing.. I loved every word. What a lovely write, thanks a lot for sharing. Kirsten~