It wasn't the W*ED

By Cwn Annwn

Smoke on the balcony of your room
Light your blood red bowl
Watch the smoke floating in the air
I'd never met anyone like you
No one so considerate, so caring
You seemed like the only one who understood me
I love the way your hair curls when it dries
Your boxers with the glow-in-the-dark dollersigns
Lay on the messy bed that's not even yours
I'll give you head for another hit
No one will understand...just how you made me feel
Because I know
It wasn't the weed...that made the night un-real
~For Dave~
3/13/04

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Copyright 2004 Noctem Aeternus
Published on Sunday, March 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • capt_funguy On Thursday, August 25, 2005, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    this was pure and easy ... social economics ... sassy reality ... didn't have to be another hit , could've been a sip of wine , or a stick of gum ... the time was right ... awesome work ... funguy

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    Lucky Dave. Sometimes I wish I was still a pothead. :::OLd

  • Cwn Annwn On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Cwn Annwn (89)By person wrote:

    !!!!!I didn't do it for another hit!!!!I did it because I liked him more than anyone I've ever met In my life.!!!!

  • bloody LOVEly On Saturday, March 27, 2004, bloody LOVEly (85)By person wrote:

    "I'll give you head for another hit"-didnt i say this was the reason? ...sorry if i cant say id do the same...maybe kiss. ^_^ cuz kissing is more fun!! PLFFFFF! @_@ you scare me.

  • -Oz- On Monday, March 15, 2004, -Oz- (131)By person wrote:

    *sigh*...don't get me wrong....i probly would have done the same thing...~oZ~

  • Exodus On Sunday, March 14, 2004, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    sexxay....lol...i enjoyed reading this alot....great write...

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