Erotic Storm
By Anaelle
The rain beat against her windshield as she drove down the nearly deserted
street. It was only 9:30, but by this time all the malls were closed and
as it was the middle of the week, people didn't have a reason to be out,
so she practically had the roads to herself. And how she loved it; normally
she would drive fast, just wanting to get home as fast as possible, but
tonight? Nah, tonight was beautiful, it was simply beautiful, the rain
pounding against the roof of her car, demanding entrance, which caused
her to smile secretly. Trying to force penetration; yes, that's the word
that ran over and over in her mind, penetration. Her fingers tightened
their grip over the steering wheel as she shifted her hips, painfully teasing
herself.
Ah, erotic. That's what it was, sinfully erotic and there was
nothing she could do about, except allow herself to be swept away, give
into the most basic human instinct. Allow her mind to be drowned out in
pleasure, his soft, alluring voice filling her ears. His? Yes, his, but
he didn't have a name. Her delicious nameless lover filling her mind and
soul with words only he knew she wanted to hear. A flash of lightning suddenly
streaked across the sky in front of her, for the briefest of moments, highlighting
all that lay around her, but it only proved to remind her of his eyes.
Devoted eyes that took in her body as if there was nothing else in the
world. Groaning, she couldn't stand it, she couldn't stand these thoughts
of hers, but she couldn't stop it no more than she could stop the storm
that surrounded her.
Another streak of lightning with a soft gasp, the rain beating
and slamming harder against her roof as if on someone's command, forcing
the heat between her legs to increase, making her ache. Everything ached.
Sweet, bloody torture, how it ached! The rumble of thunder wound it's way
through her body, making her shudder in absolute delight. The rain was
pounding so hard against the glass in front of her, she could no longer
see the road or where she was driving, but somehow it didn't matter. Somehow,
despite her trembling hands and her weakened legs she made it into her
driveway, stopping and parking the car. But she waited in silence, her
breathing coming in short, small gasps as the very fabric of her clothes
made her squirm, made her skin tingle and ache for more. Sinking down in
her seat, she moaned again with another flash of lightning, soothing, invading
thunder following right after, causing her rosie nipples to press and strain
against her silky bra. Ah, more torture, rippling through her body in waves.
His body, that's what she wanted, she wanted his body. She wanted
his fingers tangled in her hair, his comfortable weight on top of her while
she took him in, engulfed him the way this storm was engulfing her now.
Surround him and make him completely hers, her secret lover. But he was
hers, in every little fantasy, every little nighttime indulgence, he was
her - wholly and completely. She wanted him to want her, desire her, lust
for her, long for her velvety depths, fill and stretch her until it hurt.
She wanted him to take her and possess her selfishly, use her and defy
her mind, giving into her heart and body. Rape each other.
She was panting now, her knees having pulled themselves apart
and to the sides, the car provided very limited movement, but it only made
it all the more erotic. She was pinned, trapped, but she loved it. Lazily,
with her eyes half open she watched the rain beg to be let in, pushing
against the glass, rapping against the roof, her hands sliding up to give
both breasts a firm squeeze, running her thumbs over the hardened nibs
of flesh - his hands, so strong, would form perfectly around the milky
white skin, his tongue running in circles around those nipples, making
her shiver madly before he would finally pull one into his mouth and suckle
it gently, grazing it with his teeth. Yes, he knew what she liked and how
to do it. He would tease each breast until she begged for him to stop and
even then, he would only move on reluctantly. Her body squirmed as she
imagined him, her own fingers kneeding her flesh beneath her shirt and
bra, damn clothes - but there was nothing erotic about a completely nude
body.
As reluctantly as he would do it, she lowered her hands, sliding
them down over her stomach until her fingers hovered over the covered wetness
that had spread from between her thighs. She wanted it, yes, she wanted
it the same way the rain wanted to soak her clothes and cool her overheated
body. Licking her lips slowly, she gently pressed her fingers down against
the crotch of her pants as a flash of lightning electrified her eyes, her
hips immediately moving into action and pressing up against those fingers,
but her hand acted as if it weren't a part of her body, pulling away to
tease herself immensely. Yes, that's what he would do - pressing down again,
she tried to spread her thighs further, but one knee only hit the door,
the other hitting the shift stick, reminding her of how limited her movements
really were. But she wanted to open up, spread herself wide to allow the
delicious sensation of long awaited penetration. No, it was too soon, he
wouldn't give in that soon. Letting her fingers press and drag, she leaned
her head back, a low moan escaping her lips which was barely heard above
the noise of the rain. Allowing the tips of her fingers to press down against
the covered nub of nerves, her clit, her other hand began to work the button
on her jeans, struggling to pull it open with trembling fingers, but with
absolutely no success.
With a whimper of frustration, she forced herself to open her
eyes and look down, now using both hands to pull the button open and then
slide the zipper down. She was still confined; erotic. She paused to look
down at herself, past her heaving chest, eyeing the bit of dark, curly
hair that poked out from under her panties. Lightning crashed, it cracked
and boomed so near, the ground under the car shook and vibrated, but it
only made her more excited, the vibration cursing through her body as the
inside of the car was lighted for a mere second. Highlighting the curve
of her neck, her parted lips, pointed nipples and the bit of flesh just
below her stomach, she knew he wanted her, he wanted this, every single,
aching second of it.
Closing her eyes, the beat of the rain grew loud in her ears,
almost caressing her eardrums with loud whispers as he would, his silky
voice floating through her mind, creating a surreal world as her fingers
slid back down along her stomach, inching their way under her panties and
through the soft pubes that tried to hold her juices in one place. Her
fingers continue to travel down at their own sweet pace, quickly sinking
into the pleasurable juice, becoming coated and slightly sticky as her
hips squirmed and pushed upwards, desperately wanting more. The smell of
sex and desire soon drifted up to fill the car and surround her mind, her
own little self created drug that was so easy to become high on. The rain
and thunder faded slightly as her physical sense of pleasure took over,
two fingers slipping down between those two silky lips that held her center
hidden. Hidden to all except her and him. Her fingers slowly stroking the
length of her sensit ive skin, her legs tensing as she tried to draw her
knees up, but again, was painfully restrained. Her back arched as her hips
started to squirm again, only being settled once her fingers pulled back
up to stroke around the highly sensitive nub of flesh, circling around
it slowly, causing a moan to become caught in her throat. She could feel
his lips wrap around the skin on her neck and suck gently, her entire body
on fire with sensations as her car continued to be assaulted by the rain.
She could barely hold on any longer, she was already on the edge
as her sex throbbed for more attention, ached for the pleasure to be released
completely, but he wouldn't let her give in. Circling the little bud of
pleasure, her entire body shuddered softly once as his moan floated around
her mind like a gentle cloud. She was so close. Reaching up, she gripped
the top of her seat with her free hand, her knuckles immediately turning
white as she tried to stretch her body out, arching her back as her fingers
stroked down again, finding the heated hole that eagerly sucked them down.
She felt like she was going to explode, like she couldn't get a grip on
reality as her fingers sunk deeper, a low moan escaping her lips again.
This is what she truly wanted, what she longed for; to feel him
on top of her as her fingers stroked in and out, those velvety petals sucking
around them, clinging as they took what they wanted. She felt pinned against
the seat, beneath his invisible weight, his hot breath rasping against
her slightly sweated neck. Yielding to him completely as her hips pushed
up to meet her probing fingers. The rain beating against the windshield
in a frenzy as her fingers forced herself to slip into a climax, her back
arching sharply as she nearly cried out with the sweet release of built
up pleasure. A streak of lightning and echoing thunder prevented any sound
from her to be heard, her body continued to tense as ripple after ripple
of pleasure raced through her body, her fingernails digging into the cushion
of the seat above her head. But she didn't want it to end, he didn't want
it to end - forcing her fingers to slow to draw it out, the muscles in
her body ever so slowly relaxing as she collapses back against the seat,
thin sweat coating her forehead and whatever flesh that was exposed to
the air.
Shivering and whimper softly, she slowly withdrew her fingers,
finally feeling the after effect of her legs aching from straining against
the limited space that she had. She could feel him drift away, feel his
hands caress her body as he pulled back, her fingers being brought up to
her lips, her tongue darting out to lick at them before sucking them into
her mouth, between her lips to clean them off completely - the way he would
have done it. Letting her eyes open half way, lazily, she noticed that
the rain had suddenly stopped, leaving the air to feel oddly empty as she
herself felt blissfully drained, her legs completely weak with satisfaction.
Letting her hand drop, she rolled her head to the side to nuzzle against
the cushion that now seemed to form around her body perfectly. Closing
her eyes she could feel the creeping caress of the moon's blue tinted glow
spread across her body as the eerie circle rose high enough to take over
the night sky as the storm shrank away completely.
Comments on "Erotic Storm"
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A former member wrote:
wow..... I'm speechless.. with the description I could truly feel her aching desire... a true masterpiece. please keep writing.
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A former member wrote:
Of all the the things ive EVER read. This is by far the best when it comes to structure and detail, I could literally put myself into her position and feel what she felt, thank you for this passage. Write on.
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A former member wrote:
HOLY SHIT!!! Am I the only one who just got wet.???
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A former member wrote:
....wow...?
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On Wednesday, December 17, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
That was very hot. Masterfully written. Thank you for sharing the fantasy.