A Love So Pure

By _Andrew_

New hope
New life
New vision

Great gift bore unto me
Bore unto you
I pray
A love so pure
Held strong

Apart
Yet together
Bonded by words
Word of incentive
Emotion
A world found corrupt
Lost in the sea of your eyes

Time spent with you
Captivating
A reminder of what innocence once was
I find myself before you
Vulnerable once more in a life of sin
To be a faint glimmer in the eye of another
But to forever coincide
Only for you

In you I found new life
In you I found new meaning

Three words that helped me vent a new emotion
One I could not understand
A bond so strong but so weak
But true for now
Forever
I found in you
A love so pure

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Published on Wednesday, February 18, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "A Love So Pure"

On Saturday, November 25, 2017, Just Dave (448) wrote:

Beautiful poem. A lot of love there. JD
On Tuesday, August 2, 2005, ApathysKiss (377) wrote:

well gee i don't think i need to comment 'cause everyone else has said what i wanted to say. beautiful piece. ~michelle
On Friday, March 11, 2005, Dei (663) wrote:

what an elegant piece. so whistful. you have an amazing talent! will you marry me? lol
On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Crystal Passion (221) wrote:

She was indeed a lovely girl, such a shame that it could not last
On Monday, June 7, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

a very sincere feeling you've managed to capture & write down. nice. -MeL-
A former member wrote: This is purely innocent...it's not often to see males writing like this. It was quite a refreshing read. I applaud you.
On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, The Fallen Angel (234) wrote:

it sounds like in a ode to poetry...it's most certainly your gift+fallen one+
On Thursday, February 19, 2004, blackdarkness (227) wrote:

Awwww...I like it....this is so true I can relate so well...I love your writting
A former member wrote: this is really nice! I like it alot...