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Hate
By hopeless
I hate you from the depths of my heart
right down to the very toes of my soul
the hate and anger that you caused in me
will keep growing until it is as wide as the sea
and in one treacherous storm
the tital wave fo emotion
will sweep across your baren lands
and destroy all that you condemmed in me
the monsoons will wash away the happieness you gained
the typhoons will destroy your very home and name
your body will be all that is left
no soul
no pulse
just a corpse left to rot within
your newly condemmed city
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Copyright 2004 hopeless
Published on Tuesday, February 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Ocean of Truth
(43)
wrote:
makes me want to rip someones head off... i like it :)
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A former member wrote:
So much pain and emotion brought out to the pen without fear!! I love the feelings it invokes in me! Keep up the good work!
Cheers!!
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On Thursday, March 11, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
The thought of a soul having toes is intreguing. So is the way you write, good that is. Nice job
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A former member wrote:
great write. i am in awe.
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On Sunday, February 15, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Wow, where are the piles of comments? I know it's a simple title, but the poem beneath it is strong! Such a powerful and awe-inspiring display of anger... Nice write!
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