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Self Destruction
By asailorsangel
We inhibit a stage
That time abandoned
Our benevolence betrayed
By our passions for they
Who we shall not name
We recoil to the emptiest
Parts of our minds where
Even the brightest of rainbows
Turn grey and crumble
And live locked in our
Mausoleums where the remains
Of the past reflect our impending
Destruction
RT04'
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Copyright 2004 Renee Trinkaus
Published on Thursday, February 5, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Self Destruction"
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On Saturday, March 13, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328)
wrote:
I really dig the message in this..."passions for they who we shall not name" and "rainbows turn brown and crumble........good stuff
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On Saturday, March 13, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
ps I lived in tampa/clearwater for about 7 months last year
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On Saturday, March 13, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
"Our benevolences betrayed by our passions..." indeed, very deep workings here...
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A former member wrote:
Self desctruction is my middle name. Very nice write.
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A former member wrote:
I really like this. I think this captures depression very well.
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
good job here. i agree with suicidal tendencies on the last line. great write
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