A Dream Come True

By Rebel_Angel

This isn't my best work so go easy on me...


Waking up next to you,
My head resting on your chest.
You look me in the eyes,
And tell me I'm your one and only.
That we will always be together,
And nothing will change.
I close my eyes taking it all in,
The fact that we are finally together.
It isn't another dream,
It is reality...

That would be my dream come true.

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Copyright 2004 Rebel_Angel
Published on Thursday, January 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Love the ending... kinda like it is, but its not... kinda... idk... its cool though. hehehe ~*~Tart~*~

  • ONEANDLONELY On Sunday, September 5, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (114)By person wrote:

    very peaceful...makes me feel good...

  • Spikes_of_Blue On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue (42)By person wrote:

    amazing...breathtaking...like im absolutely breathless...hit me right in the chest...

  • a restless wanderer On Saturday, April 3, 2004, a restless wanderer (14)By person wrote:

    the night before might feel good for a while, but the next morning always lasts forever, good luck, dreams do come true

  • Midnight Phoenix On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    The feeling you're experiencing in this is very sought after. Express it every chance you get! It's beautiful.

  • blackdarkness On Friday, January 30, 2004, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    paints a great picture

  • Blacken_Heart On Friday, January 30, 2004, Blacken_Heart (20)By person wrote:

    awww...thats a good one too, I like it.

  • Rebel_Angel On Friday, January 30, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    Thank you all for wonderful comments, I was kinda worried about this one and Secrets. I'm glad so many liked it. It really makes be happy!

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, January 30, 2004, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    Ahh, my favorite saying: "if only." Great write indeed.

  • hopeless On Thursday, January 29, 2004, hopeless (51)By person wrote:

    im honestly speachless because this is exactly what ive dreamed.. and you put it into words... this is nice... and im glad ur back with writing hun... ~hopeless

  • Aurora_Light On Thursday, January 29, 2004, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    nice indeed i like it it speaks of hope that so many lose i'm glad that u havent yet

  • The_Scavenger On Thursday, January 29, 2004, The_Scavenger (30)By person wrote:

    Great write. Those words describe my own dream come true but mostlikly with a different person in mind.;)

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