Thoughts

By Blacken_Heart

"Thoughts"

Love
Or
Lust
What can i fine
Sex
Or
Rape
It's all in my mind
Wisper
Or
Yell
So very Unkind
Pull
Or
Push
Under moonshine
Angel
Or
Demon
I'm so Blind
Wanted
Or
Force
Can you define.

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Copyright 2004 Blacken_Heart
Published on Monday, January 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Melancholic VIncent On Monday, June 25, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (429)By person wrote:

    Good piece with contrasts, I read your profile, age of 14 for people like us is a hard time, and I understand all the hate you feel, i suggest that you went through something awful. Well, it get's better with time, you'll find someone that matches you :)

  • A former member wrote: I love this its so different and unique, i love it

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, January 31, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I like this, it is different but different is good!

  • Blacken_Heart On Friday, January 30, 2004, Blacken_Heart (20)By person wrote:

    thanx!

  • Drea On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    this is different.. i like this. i cant put my finger on it...but there is something about this i like.. ~Drea~

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