"help"

By Forever Cold

How can I walk beside you everyday,
Wondering dose he see it?
Dose he feel it as I do?
For every day I stand by you,
This want grows deeper.
And this feeling grows everyday.
Fear my worst enemy.
Every time I look you in the eyes,
I see the place I want to be,
Wrapped safe in your arms
In your eyes to see me as I see you.

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Copyright 2004 Forever Cold
Published on Sunday, January 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Awesome, I like this write alot. I like the picture of you as well in your profile. Kick ass, gothic is awesome.

  • Blinded_Tiger On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    I relate alot to your works. It is done with a clear and brutal form of insight. Often when I read it I sit and get lost in it. Like you and your poetry are a world of its own. One that I can enter at will. But, it is allways hard to leave ... Tiger

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