Legendary (His Absence)

By asailorsangel

She is wandering again
In and out of the passages
Of lost dreams and empty hopes

Legendary with his absence

Her soul filling with a somber
Stillness as her feet quietly
Shuffle through the desolate space

Legendary with his absence

Unanchored she saunters instinctively
Through the doors of apprehensions
And feverishly turns the locks

Legendary with his absence

Entering a room she can hear
The buzzing of the meaningless beliefs
And flickering of hopelessness

Legendary with his absence





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Copyright 2003 Renee Trinkaus
Published on Tuesday, December 2, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: In life people think they are great, in the afterlife, they would still think they are great. That is what I got from this poem. Yay!

  • Midnight Phoenix On Sunday, December 7, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    The problem with silence is that every small sound and thought echoes until you know nothing else.

  • Midnight Phoenix On Sunday, December 7, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    Annah Hutchings is absolutely brilliant!!! I went to the site and I think she's become my favorite artist.

  • A Velvet Tongue On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    the sounds of absence can be so very loud , quite deafening in fact..this piece showered me in lonliness and grief..I hope he returns to her...I loved this piece..*Vel*

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