killing me softly

By kissofdeath



Your voice is so piercing.
the killing kind of noise, your words are the devil they kill mw with joy.
Your killng me softly, I can see the joy in your face. I hear the selfishness and mockery in every sentence that you make.

Why do I listen? Why do I stay?

Your emblem beared so proudly upon It will stay there until my death._


part II

Killing me softly with the tip of your tongue
Sometimes I dont know if I should stay or run.

I enjoy your killing somehow Its the only way to hold on.

I just wish you'd be done!- So I could move on.


If death is the way, I proudly bear down,

Your killing me softly with every little sound.-



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Copyright 2003 kissofdeath
Published on Friday, October 17, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • OLd SouL On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    one of my favorites by you. your emotions are like a typhoon.. when it rains, it pours. *hug*

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    mmmm wow...very deep

  • A former member wrote: very good piece, a poem that was very deep with so little words.

  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Friday, October 17, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55)By person wrote:

    very nice piece, the way you worded the the entire piece was simple perfect, thanks for sharing

  • A former member wrote: yes men good work it flowed so nicely im afraid to do that simply because my words dibt sound right well nice very nice

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