Antonyms For Love Song

By JensGoneMad

Focus,
Comprehend!
Your lying,
Stop trying to pretend.
Listen,
Stop interrupting me!
You're see-through,
Empty.
This is hatred,
I spit in your face
Gut-wrenching
Silk and lace.
Warning,
With your sirons song.
Helpless,
You don't belong.
STOP,
Touching me,
STOP,
Klutching me.
Please

 

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Copyright 2020 JensGoneMad
Published on Saturday, August 15, 2020.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Two sides to every story, right?
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  • JensGoneMad On Monday, August 17, 2020, JensGoneMad (46)By person wrote:

    How do I have two?

  • Phalanx On Sunday, August 16, 2020, Phalanx (678)By person wrote:

    Stop. You don't know enough. People have their quarrels. It's not your place.

  • JensGoneMad On Sunday, August 16, 2020, JensGoneMad (46)By person wrote:

    Why can't this be my Quarrel? Silly man

  • Phalanx On Sunday, August 16, 2020, Phalanx (678)By person wrote:

    You changed the title too, not justanearlbird.

  • Phalanx On Sunday, August 16, 2020, Phalanx (678)By person wrote:

    Point being, I placed one comment and it showed up on two different profiles.

  • JensGoneMad On Tuesday, August 18, 2020, JensGoneMad (46)By person wrote:

    I have no clue what you are talking about

  • Phalanx On Sunday, August 16, 2020, Phalanx (678)By person wrote:

    You speak the same comments from two different profiles.

  • JustAnEarlyBird On Sunday, August 16, 2020, JustAnEarlyBird (39)By person wrote:

    Pretty on point. We all have our perspective, don't we? And it's hard sometimes to view it from the other person's side. Too bad we can't read thoughts, make sense of the other sides thought process more. Good read. Look forward to reading more of your work!

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