this death

By vamp_111

and there demons
have me cornered
feasting on my soul...
devouring everything
everything i ever had
the little confidence i had
all gone.
the happy memories
the tinyest speck of love
no emotion...

those shadows
and there demons
they've finished their meal now...
they left me
only this is the worst death
becuase this death 
keeps you living
it makes every gasp of air hurt
like fire in your lungs
it makes you stay 
and watch your world, your freinds, your family
just simply crumble
and it prevents you from being able to do anything about it
so helplessly...

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Copyright 2019 vamp_111
Published on Wednesday, February 27, 2019.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • sadistic intent hex On Monday, September 16, 2019, sadistic intent hex (223)By person wrote:

    feels like your writing of a wound that just won't heel your comment it makes every breath hurt like fire in the lungs paint a picture of complete misery.

  • Divine hell On Wednesday, April 10, 2019, Divine hell (280)By person wrote:

    This whole poem is gut punch at least for me, I really enjoyed how you put this together sweet write

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Wednesday, March 27, 2019, sTr8-jAcKeT (794)By person wrote:

    Pretty deep writing, from the gut & raw. Good jobber.

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