little death

By Loserland

The moon shines over bats flying about
As nature’s nocturnal voices cry out
The summer is ripe, memento of hell
The air is filled with a smoke-burned smell
A sudden breeze enters chilling the town
As pools of sweat drip down to the ground
You stand naked near the woods’ edge
Holding a candle trembling in hand
Wandering as if tranced, so possessed
Feel a sharp prick tickling around your neck
Scraping flesh through the mist of night
Across your shoulder, down your wet thigh
Exasperated to submission of the dark
The cold body steals the warmth of heart
You turn to identify the beast drawing you in
Quaffing every juice that spills from your skin
And with our joining, breath to breath
I’ll bring to you a little death

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Copyright 2003 Loser Johnson
Published on Tuesday, September 30, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: It was slightly .... erotic. But not sexual. Just raw, id say. Very good imagery. Another great one :)

  • AHHH On Wednesday, August 18, 2004, AHHH (187)By person wrote:

    wow amazing write

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Thursday, October 2, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    well done....dark images flow in and out of my brain while reading

  • A former member wrote: Oh wow - amazing to read. It puts such vivid images into your mind. Love the work!

  • Drea On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    dark images dance through my head as i read this....you are a great writer. ~Drea~ X\(..)/X\

  • hate_doll On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    I like your use of adjectives and verbs...you make a tantalizingly wicked image in my head...I really enjoy your work :)

  • Lydia Jade On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Lydia Jade (1350)By person wrote:

    i cant think of any more praises that are worthy of your work but im leaving a comment so you know i love this one as well! ~tears~

  • Silent_Raven On Sunday, October 19, 2003, Silent_Raven (19)By person wrote:

    wow, strangely erotic, i would say. great piece, i like the imagery in this, and sorry if we have the same title. (thanks for commenting, though =) ) *RAVEN.*

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