Headless

By Loserland

Porcelain headless figures
With perfect figures
Colored in black highlights
Red dripping from the dome
Staring at me without eyes
Almost cartoonish
Playful but deadly
The yellow tape separates
These creatures from this side
Flashing cameras
Whispers echoing on walls
The white chalk visible
The dark red puddle hardened
The creator of these dolls
Limp on the floor below
Ironically severed and painted
No evidence of a struggle
No motive for decapitation
No fingerprints of another party
was ever found
The case was closed as homicide
No one was ever prosecuted
I remember one of the figures
Held a blood dripping sword in his hand

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Copyright 2003 Loser Johnson
Published on Monday, September 29, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • prodigy789 On Friday, June 22, 2012, prodigy789 (31)By person wrote:

    thats brutal! nice

  • SorrowSoul On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, SorrowSoul (54)By person wrote:

    An interesting write. Very vivid imagery.

  • Nesfurata On Friday, October 15, 2004, Nesfurata (58)By person wrote:

    "Staring at me without eyes" is a great line. I love it -Elizabeth

  • AHHH On Saturday, August 21, 2004, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    awesome write...

  • A former member wrote: Very intersting. The imagery is very powerful, penetrating like a dripping sword :)

  • A former member wrote: You are one of my favourite poets. Inspirational, I might not know anything about poetry, but i like what i see.

  • Drea On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    agrees with dolly yet again..~Drea~ X\(..)/X\

  • hate_doll On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, hate_doll (263)By person wrote:

    ooh...creepy...heh, your morbid imagination brings great writing out...I like...

  • A former member wrote: Neat read.

  • Lydia Jade On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Lydia Jade (1332)By person wrote:

    did i mention that i love you!! ~tears~

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