offspring

....... If only they knew
mind body soul they subdue....
........ all my wants withdrew

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Published on Sunday, February 12, 2017. Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"

Comments on "offspring"

A former member wrote: A very telling haiku about how becoming parents can truly transform us into completely different human beings. Nothing holds power over us quite like children, aye? Welcome to DP! Reb:).
On Monday, February 13, 2017, Drea (1388) wrote:

Haikus aren't easy. You have to say so much with so little. I think you did a nice job here.
On Monday, February 13, 2017, cogitative (88) wrote:

greatly created haiku
On Monday, February 13, 2017, motherofnature (46) wrote:

thnx I tried
On Monday, February 13, 2017, dwells (4177) wrote:

Great screen pic MoN and welcome to DP! Children can transform the parents into many nurturing configurations hopefully. And then it will be their turn! You few words say so much. Cheers! - Dan
On Monday, February 13, 2017, motherofnature (46) wrote:

thank you so much im so relieved someone enjoyed it and understood the message. so much to convey in such a little haiku. I hope it was bearable
On Sunday, February 12, 2017, motherofnature (46) wrote:

I mothers rendition
On Sunday, February 12, 2017, MR feathered fox (28) wrote:

Welcome to DP Nicely spoken in few words
On Monday, February 13, 2017, motherofnature (46) wrote:

thank you FF