Breathless

By felicity0444

Breathless
You leave me trembling
Lightheaded and pulsing with desire
Aching with need
As you turn away
And that long ago buried
Seed of disappointment
Blooms fresh with life
It’s colors of Despair
And emptiness of soul
Petals too heavy
To blow in the breeze
On its way to the sun
My weak petals crumble
beneath the sole of your shoe
The soft earth swallowing 
my seed once again
Waiting for the next rain. 
 

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Copyright 2016 felicity0444
Published on Wednesday, August 10, 2016.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Thursday, August 25, 2016, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    "Seed of disappointment Blooms fresh with life" I love this line. Great piece! -Write on Scholar

  • felicity0444 On Thursday, August 25, 2016, felicity0444 (61)By person wrote:

    That's my favorite line too :) Thank you!

  • SinisterSinner On Wednesday, August 10, 2016, SinisterSinner (41)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful and powerful. AWESOME!

  • felicity0444 On Wednesday, August 10, 2016, felicity0444 (61)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much :)

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