You Finally Give In

By felicity0444

You forget you shouldn't feel
As your eyes brim with tears
And the softness whispers
Suddenly in your ear.
Someone so near
Touches your soul
And makes you feel fear
You just want be alone,
But they catch your eye
And you stand transfixed.
Longing to touch
Aching in your chest.
As you sink to your knees
Your cheeks flushing pink.
Your hand in my hand
Right on the brink.
That moment in time
When you finally give in
Then quick like the wind
You're off again.
Free from the feelings
And touches of care.
Here come the blinders
Your comfortable flair.
Back too where you were
Back
to
despair.
Why should they care?

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Copyright 2016 felicity0444
Published on Wednesday, July 6, 2016.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • DarkJimpanzee95 On Thursday, July 7, 2016, DarkJimpanzee95 (5)By person wrote:

    I feel the love in here. And I loved the last line because why should they care about what you have. Nicely done,good poet.Keep writing...

  • felicity0444 On Thursday, July 7, 2016, felicity0444 (62)By person wrote:

    Thank you!

  • RoseTheBrokenHearted On Thursday, July 7, 2016, RoseTheBrokenHearted (131)By person wrote:

    I feel, as if, love is one of the most feared things on this planet. You have portrayed that fear well. Nicely done, fellow poet :)

  • felicity0444 On Thursday, July 7, 2016, felicity0444 (62)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much!

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful work, keep writing.

  • felicity0444 On Thursday, July 7, 2016, felicity0444 (62)By person wrote:

    Thank you! I appreciate that very much!

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