Moma...

By TheMistressBucket

I'm sorry.
So sorry I couldn't do it.
I couldn't be loved,
and I never could win the heart on the fucking wall...
I'm sorry Moma,
I didn't learn the first time.
I'm sorry I couldn't do like I should have,
for you.
I'm sorry that in the end,
I couldn't settle for settling...
I know how disapointed you
and your family are in me.
I'm sorry Moma,
I couldn't be more
like what you expected of me.
I'm sorry Moma,
I didn't fall far enough from the tree...

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Copyright 2003 TheMistressBucket
Published on Saturday, September 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dei On Thursday, December 23, 2004, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    hits home. *whipes away a tear*I'm "sorry Moma, I couldn't be more like what you expected of me" i know that one, the last line, wonderful

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, September 14, 2003, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    You're very good at turning things around ;)

  • manywalks On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Hmmm, rather liked the last line of this, so fitting for the mood it cast while reading, well done. ~ mw

  • Crystal Passion On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    ^^ AGREES. Loved the last line :P -kRYZ

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