December's Pain

By Tagen

Even darker than its twilight hours,
December's thirst for light is rare.
Even stronger than its brumal powers,
Is December's beauty, caught in the air.
 
Stronger now, effervescent thunder -
Lightning stark against the sky.
Stronger horses on the arrow -
Life-long oblivion stirs my mind.
 
Sting of bees, nectar vows.
Lucid highs and blows without
Blood and bruising, always losing....
Trains of thought,
 
I thought without.

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Copyright 2016 Tagen
Published on Wednesday, February 24, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Wednesday, September 12, 2018, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    Man you packed a lot of visuals into a semi-small space here and made me feel like I was reading a small part of something epic. I thought your word choice was excellent and the flow was gentle. Interesting read, is there more to the story? Isn't there always?

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, September 7, 2016, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Much to muse on here and the flow was wonderful and well paced.

  • Dimensions On Sunday, February 28, 2016, Dimensions (94)By person wrote:

    Loved this especially the opening stanza.

  • A former member wrote: "Is December's beauty, caught in the air." I love how you catch emotion in this poem. Nice!

  • A former member wrote: A compelling read well constructed in both concept and form. Congrats on this one.

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