Pieces of Me

By WillowGreybird

I have been a match
to many better halves,
but they were puzzle pieces
forced to fit together.

Pieces of sky to pieces of sea,
pieces of them to pieces of me.

They seemed perfect
until you looked just a bit too close.
Those smiles revealed chipped paint,
those hands clasped just a little too tight.

They didn't like what I let them see,
so they hacked away at those pieces of me.

There is no luminescence in any soul
to highlight my shadows.
Instead there is one
whose demons dance with mine.

Exactly what a second half should be,
the pieces of him fit with all the pieces of me.

Its the little things that matter most.
Stories of falling skies,
tales of a much-loved black cat,
dreams within a waking nightmare.

And so with a timid whisper I do decree,
that he holds every piece of me.
 

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Copyright 2016 WillowGreybird
Published on Saturday, January 23, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Lab Rat On Saturday, January 23, 2016, Lab Rat (124)By person wrote:

    I like the imagery, the cleverness of this. It rises and falls elegantly in its mood and language. Thank you

  • Cant walk away On Saturday, January 23, 2016, Cant walk away (30)By person wrote:

    A beautifully spoken love, so complex in nature. Almost defining who we are. Lovely!

  • Commander_Cadaver On Saturday, January 23, 2016, Commander_Cadaver (233)By person wrote:

    It's good to know that there are other people the love their black cat like this guy. Very good write. You never disappoint.

  • Commander_Cadaver On Saturday, January 23, 2016, Commander_Cadaver (233)By person wrote:

    Other people that* Grammar...

  • WillowGreybird On Saturday, January 23, 2016, WillowGreybird (23)By person wrote:

    I knew what you meant. Context, read between the lines, blah blah blah. :3

  • Commander_Cadaver On Saturday, January 23, 2016, Commander_Cadaver (233)By person wrote:

    Oooo you're good.

  • FellowFutureFossil On Saturday, January 23, 2016, FellowFutureFossil (24)By person wrote:

    This is good. The emotion really comes across in this. That deep sentiment is there. Keep on writing!

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