I Was The Queen

By FireAsylum

                             
                                                              Been serving all my life
                                                       And I wondered if I'm doing it right 
                                                    The frowned faces never made sense






                                                            I was the Queen all along

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Copyright 2015 FireAsylum
Published on Thursday, June 11, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Bloody brilliant!

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Saturday, June 13, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Boom! Excellent piece and I also like the closing zinger. Well done! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • FireAsylum On Sunday, June 21, 2015, FireAsylum (19)By person wrote:

    Well the closing zinger is all there is to it! Good to know you enjoyed!

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, June 11, 2015, carlosjackal (3016)By person wrote:

    I really like the wit and rug pull of the closing line. Nicely and succinctly done.

  • FireAsylum On Sunday, June 21, 2015, FireAsylum (19)By person wrote:

    Thank you[=

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