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My Feeding
By Trichotillomaniac
I want to feed off his love and affection
Know he only looks in my direction
His heart must yearn for me
Longing, crying, wishing to be
I'd take it all and never look back
To hear the sounds of his sobs crack
I'd suck in his air, spit it out again
Make him wish, he'd be a real man.
I choose to break him, and never repair
See if he questions me, wonder if he dares
His eyes, open wide, looking at me
Begging pleading, wishing to be
Wishing to be loved.
But that's not the game.
I live on affection, only I can gain.
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Copyright 2003 Trichotillomaniac A.K.A Sarah
Published on Sunday, September 7, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "My Feeding"
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A former member wrote:
This is really good, but I think the rhyme structure is limiting you. Just a friendly piece of advice.
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A former member wrote:
This is good but could be so much better if you didnt concentrate on rhyming so much alot of times variation makes a piece.. but this is pretty good, keep rockin lm/,
kelly~
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On Thursday, December 30, 2004, toy soldier
(26)
wrote:
i would'nt want to be that guy. good stuff
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
a most revealing and honest piece, a shade of darkness open to light........well done well said.......urban
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
wonderfully selfish, good write.
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
very nice, the flow was perfect not to mention the depiction of the torture you caused i loved it, thanks for sharing
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
Loved the ending...~Delilah~
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