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Dismal
By Dismalmind
I was speechless
When inhaled her breath
As a unique soul inhabiting two bodies
Nothing she could do better
Than revive a dead heart
She took me from myself
To put herself in me
One heart, one love, one soul
Packed in a kiss
Truest feelings are shared
Hers are mine, reciprocally
I got lost in her eyes
Singing whispers echoing inside
Days of joy
Remains in my mind
Endless summer
A great gig in the sky
My dismal in waking up from this dream
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Copyright 2015 Dismalmind
Published on Friday, March 13, 2015.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
This is really a beautiful, romantic piece. A kind of love that a lot of people long for but don't always find. Cherish it. Awesome ink.
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On Friday, March 13, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
"I was speechless When inhaled her breath" - great opening line, which builds on the theme of being filled and changed in the process. Great piece! Ciao, T/S
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