last night

By Nemo

an angel visited me last night.
her glow was a snow white.
she kneeled by my side.
and said everything will be alright.
but you are dying tonight.
so please don't fight the light.
cuz i'll be by your side.
for the whole ride.
as i go towards the light.
her image fades away.
then a quiet voice says.
i'm here it will be okay,

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Copyright 2015 biohazzard
Published on Thursday, February 19, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

do you know where ur going?? suicide never the answer
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  • Purposelessness On Tuesday, May 22, 2018, Purposelessness (150)By person wrote:

    Sounds amazing, take me there. I liked the flow, but not as much as what I saw when I read it.

  • SolApathy On Monday, January 16, 2017, SolApathy (665)By person wrote:

    Congratulations on POTD!

  • Nemo On Monday, January 16, 2017, Nemo (77)By person wrote:

    THANK-YOU ALL

  • LordColdwater On Monday, January 16, 2017, LordColdwater (31)By person wrote:

    well done, grats on POTD

  • 10 Forty Three On Monday, January 16, 2017, 10 Forty Three (593)By person wrote:

    Beautiful poem. Congrats on POTD! - 10:43

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful, my love. There are no words. Reb:).

  • 10 Forty Three On Saturday, October 22, 2016, 10 Forty Three (593)By person wrote:

    I hope it's that peaceful when that time comes.. This poem has a good feel to it. Well done. - 10:43

  • Just Dave On Wednesday, September 7, 2016, Just Dave (458)By person wrote:

    I love a visual poem. Very nice. Great write. TY

  • A former member wrote: I really like this one. It has a peaceful feel to it.

  • Nemo On Tuesday, February 24, 2015, Nemo (77)By person wrote:

    thank you all for the comments

  • Jessica Orr On Thursday, February 19, 2015, Jessica Orr (30)By person wrote:

    @biohazzard...I love angel symbolism and the warm wrappings of arms. Really nice poem

  • A former member wrote: It's very good even though it is not done yet.

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