Spiders in the Moon.

By Pride Ed

Fat and swollen like a pearl;
translucent, and engorged on
blood, you hung there in
my curtains until I pulled them
down. You hit with such force,
like a rock tumbling down a
black mountain, or a comet
falling out of a web of stars!
You looked like varicose veins
throbbing on the surface of an
egg loosely wrapped in molded
tissue paper, or cloth-hairs stuck
to a family heirloom. So I
left you there until you
collapsed in yourself like a
dying star, or the soft spot of
a newborn’s head frosted over
by gossamer silk that dug
its pale-white hands
in the wood-rot.

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Copyright 2014 Pride Ed
Published on Friday, November 14, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kristoff On Friday, November 14, 2014, Kristoff (37)By person wrote:

    The similes were quite effective, thanks for the share.

  • Pride Ed On Saturday, November 15, 2014, Pride Ed (107)By person wrote:

    No, thank you for reading! :D

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