Bubbles

By Rebel_Angel

This isn't finished yet, but I have been trying to finish it for like a month and haven't so I figured I would post it and see what happens.

They float in the air,
And do not scare.
They can be fun,
If you don?t run.
They have no feelings,
Or any hidden meanings.
They are carefree,
And meant to be.
You don?t have to figure them out,
Or hide any doubt.

Arn't they great!

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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Wednesday, September 3, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Drea On Saturday, December 20, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    i love bubbles. now all i can think of is ozzy saying "Bubbles...bubbles sharon..i'm ozzy osbourne..the princes of fucking darkness"...LOL ~Drea~

  • blackdarkness On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, blackdarkness (228)By person wrote:

    Bubbles!!! there pretty!! YAY....

  • GreekPhilosopher On Thursday, September 4, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Bubbles! Nice Write. GPhD.

  • _Andrew_ On Thursday, September 4, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    you know, my old french teacher used to tlak to us about flying to school in her own bubble, i can now understand where she came from, i kind of regret saying i'd shoot it out of the sky with a shotgun, hehe *~*aNDReW*~*

  • Crystal Passion On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    Yes they are great and so are you =) -Kryz

  • Kittichoo On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, Kittichoo (37)By person wrote:

    Seems finished to me. cute

  • Aurora_Light On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    hehe i member u showing me this i like it bubbles are fun to play w/ nice write too

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