He Gave Me The Good Stuff

By SickSanityJenn

Down on my knees
Consumed by sickness
So eager to please
For some quick bliss
Lack of restraint
Deny addiction
No cause for complaint
Feed my afflictions
Curb my hunger with the filth of your dark mind
Take me down into the shadows of your eyes
Drain my blood and fill my veins with metal shavings
Rip my heart out and infuse me with your craving
Drugged and abused
Sore with hunger
Worn from misuse
Senseless, I suffer
Nowhere to hide
The needles fold
I'm losing my mind
Or so I'm told
Callous and unforgiving are the hands that feed me
I fight against this disease that consumes me
And in the darkness I find myself stumbling away
Naked and broken with no more words to say

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Copyright 2014 SickSanityJenn
Published on Sunday, August 31, 2014.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Quite interesting poem... Room for the audience to envision what it means to them, while keeping a personal flair for yourself. Wonderful balance.

  • SickSanityJenn On Friday, September 19, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Sunday, August 31, 2014, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    working through a lot of daemons with this one? it seems... not certain where one wants to draw the line on interpretations of inferences... ? Scholar

  • SickSanityJenn On Sunday, August 31, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250)By person wrote:

    I wanted to leave room for interpretation...

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, August 31, 2014, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...you state it accurately. it's good that you found your way to escape...

  • SickSanityJenn On Sunday, August 31, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250)By person wrote:

    It isn't easy to stop doing something you know is wrong but doesn't feel wrong...

  • A former member wrote: Well composed. Excellent!

  • SickSanityJenn On Sunday, August 31, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much

  • A former member wrote: Amazing well penned piece!.. The rawness and pain in your words is vivid and intense.. I hope you overcome those demons soon.. Thank you for sharing :)

  • SickSanityJenn On Sunday, August 31, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250)By person wrote:

    Thank you... It's been a long time but the mind refuses to forget

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