Feeling Frankenstein

By SickSanityJenn

The despair crawls the length of my soul
Dragging it's nails along my bones
You've butchered my resolve with gnashing teeth
And hammered your sickness into my meat
Constant sorrow beats upon my brow
Leaving me twisted with a guttural growl
You dig your fingers into my core
Picking to pieces, inflicting sores
Wherever you lay your eyes, I bleed
Ripping my heart out before you feed
A lump of emotion without a taste
Devouring sadness leaves me to waste
Your evil intent has filled my soul
Stitching together my flesh and bone
Pleasure and pain have become one
Under your black sky, there is no sun
A glance in the mirror takes me back
Only dead eyes seem to stare back
A twisted smile disfigures my features
Why would you create this monstrous creature?

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Copyright 2014 SickSanityJenn
Published on Sunday, August 10, 2014.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • SickSanityJenn On Sunday, August 10, 2014, SickSanityJenn (260)By person wrote:

    Thank you all so much. I appreciate the reads, comments and lovely compliments :)

  • A former member wrote: Perfection lies inside the lyrics of this poem. The imagery is breath taking as well the meaning.

  • A former member wrote: This is deliciously dark and well written...I enjoyed it very much! I love the title you chose, it's perfect for this gory masterpiece. Nicely done!

  • A former member wrote: Wow and just wow! This piece is excellent.. A myriad of sad feelings run through my mind as I read the despair and sorrow in your words.. Thank you for sharing! :)

  • A former member wrote: Great job! I love your style, very well penned.

  • soul_versing On Sunday, August 10, 2014, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    And with a razor tongue it savers the meat. Mmm. Twisted and hardcore. Much enjoyment, love. I enjoy a descriptive imagination. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I really love the last line. This was very unnerving but i enjoyed it alot. Keep up the great writing my talented friend. Scholar

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