Forbidden Delight
By Peyton1
He claws thru burning debris to get to Her, but She's not the same.
His resolve crumbles, Her overpowering will pulls him into Her flame.
Her skin twitches as the new demons begin to hatch,
a hunger burns deep inside which no other can match.
Even if he could run, he would not survive.
Fear captured, helps these beasts to thrive.
His forsaken soul is fated to do only Her bidding, no turning back.
Her wicked blood spills into his throat, his gaze begins turning black.
Her essence so full of sin, and it tastes absolutely delicious!
Forevermore he becomes the queen's obedient little vicious!
She savors his lovely pain as the mortal mask is taken aloose.
His blood drips from Her face as She removes humanity's noose.
Her unholy shrieks give vibration even to those with deaf ears.
The shadows close in to deal new cards of unfathomable fears.
While a darkened fog approaches, the tainted moonlight for a brief moment
borrows the shape of the queen's sharp wingtips. It casts a silken shadow
of luminescent trailing edges across the blood laden fangs of his
enraged and uncontrollable hunger. Chaos then begins to consume this
forgotten town beneath the cover of a sweet empowering darkness as She
spreads Her wings full open to block the moon's eerie glow.
The light no longer has power here, its broad beam unrequited.
His skin crawls as it welcomes the evil, darkness is reaquainted.
He hides behind the mask no more, bare is the terror for all to see.
This creature cuts a path thru your vision, just to watch it bleed.
If you have a god, you should pray
for a quick kill if they should find you.
Liberated of mortal flesh, look away
enlightened lusts cut deep and true.
The gates of Hell are swung open wide this night,
as they dine, together, of her every forbidden delight.
Author's Note:
Inspired by: Disturbed music videos...... partlyComments on "Forbidden Delight"
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A former member wrote:
Your Pen Is Very Sharp My Friend. Great Story...
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2014, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Thank you for the comment, glad you enjoyed my little story. I kind of put my own twist and added a little plot change thru my inspiration from the Disturbed video 'The Animal'. I do like to twist a story. Thanks again,,,and welcome to DP..................... ~ACE~
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On Monday, June 30, 2014, haunted
(837) wrote:
hell yeah, this is my kind of poetry. ill be the first in line at hells gates to be blessed in her darkness. this is just to cool, your dark muse payed off because this is really good. a great story, i was hooked on your first stanza and on. and although this queen of hell is evil, shes just as beautiful in all her glory. awesome poem peyton!
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On Monday, June 30, 2014, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
That is quite an awesome comment, thank you much Haunted. It seems the darkness keeps pulling at me, figured I may as well write about it. Glad you liked it, I'll be just to right of the gates....look for me, I have tickets for some of the best seats! HaHaHaa.................. ~ACE~