tattered poem

By FadedBlues

tattered poem

she writes an infinity of I-love-you’s
on linen stationery then crumples each
page & tosses it at the corner waste basket,
she scores 2-points on one out of every three
throws while the other little tattered & crumpled
almost-poems cuddle up to the base of that
monument to archaic romance, she does this
because love doesn’t need poems, love needs us,
you & me, holding each other so tightly it’s like we
will be sucked into each other’s body, so close as if
we were welded together, so let’s do that,

let’s love each other more beautiful than even a poem.

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Copyright 2014 FadedBlues
Published on Tuesday, May 20, 2014.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • A former member wrote: Perfect art pairing...heart-warming poem...love the old-fashioned diction. "Linen stationary / archaic romance." Such a good-spirited piece; the tenderness is palpable and the lines are richly worded.

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, May 22, 2014, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...Friends & Poets, thanks. the antique artwork mirrors the poem...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, May 21, 2014, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Nice one FB. The lack of love and the lack of words will eventually give way and bring about more of both. Cool piece, man. Later -

  • blue angel On Wednesday, May 21, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    and what an imperial love it is.. loved seeing this one again, it's a sweet reminder of love in the flesh, thank you. Blues :)~

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