WAKE UP!

By infinitebeing

Sleeper
     Wakeup
             to the spider web


Ego
    Clinging
             to the fine sliky thread


Vanity
     Spinning
              this  glitter around your head



Deceit
      wrapping 
               your eyes and leaving you dead

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Copyright 2014 infinitebeing
Published on Friday, January 3, 2014.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Saturday, January 6, 2018, Just Dave (448)By person wrote:

    Great poem. I little creepy, in a good way. Glad I stumbled on it. JD

  • worm On Sunday, July 16, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    i like it!

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Wednesday, April 16, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium (273)By person wrote:

    I love this!! What a fantastic and original way to relay this message. Great write ! :)

  • megaprime81 On Sunday, January 5, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Wow! It ended with me wanting more. Didn't know it was so short; love it. 10

  • blue angel On Friday, January 3, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Awesome piece of poetry:)~ Sends a chilling message too, well written*

  • infinitebeing On Friday, January 3, 2014, infinitebeing (80)By person wrote:

    much appreciated

  • A former member wrote: a wise prospective indeed!

  • infinitebeing On Friday, January 3, 2014, infinitebeing (80)By person wrote:

    its the form and phenomena that blinds most

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