Gone.

By Lil Demon Lady

Almost 6 years, 
Gone,
Small disagreements, 
Became big, 
Little things, 
That are of no consequence, 
Become mountains, 
Insurmountable to pass, 
Anger flourished, 
Where love once grew, 
And a garden of roses, 
Became nothing but thorns, 
All due to insecurities, 
and whispered words, 
because we weren't the way we should,
Things were damaged, 
A little broken,
It wasn't understood, 
So it went unspoken, 
The fuel that gave our love its fire, 
Turned out to be nothing more, 
Then unfulfilled desires. 

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Copyright 2013 Lil Demon Lady
Published on Tuesday, September 5, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Melancholic VIncent On Friday, December 20, 2013, Melancholic VIncent (429)By person wrote:

    A relationship that went sour? Is that what this is about? Relationships can be chaotic... And when we end up with someone that is not compatible with us (which I don't know if it's the case, just referring to my own experience) we will end up clashing hard against each other and that is ought to create some damage on each parts.... I hope you managed to overcome whatever that has happened to you and brought you such a sour taste to your mouth. Nothing hurts more than "unfulfilled desires", it's like a boiling mixture in our depth, eventually it's gonna want to surface in an explosive way...

  • Lil Demon Lady On Saturday, December 21, 2013, Lil Demon Lady (39)By person wrote:

    I'll say a part of it went sour, one thing, a very important thing, clashed horridly. We've managed to stay friends, good ones now in fact, better now that we aren't trying push into something because we 'should'.

  • Melancholic VIncent On Saturday, December 21, 2013, Melancholic VIncent (429)By person wrote:

    At least, something was saved. I was in a relationship a year ago and there was nothing to be salvaged from it, it was an unhealthy relationship and the person showed me in the end that she didn't deserved anything from me...

  • Lil Demon Lady On Sunday, December 22, 2013, Lil Demon Lady (39)By person wrote:

    Yeah, sometimes nothing can be done when it ends and even more so, often nothing should be done.

  • Sketso On Monday, December 9, 2013, Sketso (435)By person wrote:

    tragically well expressed... cursed subject bettered by the "pen" somewhat?

  • Lil Demon Lady On Saturday, December 21, 2013, Lil Demon Lady (39)By person wrote:

    It often helps to 'pen' it down, once I write it down. My mind starts to clear and I can be more rational. ♥

  • SaintNHB On Sunday, December 8, 2013, SaintNHB (41)By person wrote:

    Its like you took a look into my past and wrote accordingly. Beautifully written, my lovely.

  • Lil Demon Lady On Sunday, December 8, 2013, Lil Demon Lady (39)By person wrote:

    Awww. ♥ Thank You.

  • A former member wrote: A really beautiful work of poetry, heart wrenching and relatable.

  • Lil Demon Lady On Sunday, December 8, 2013, Lil Demon Lady (39)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • Electric-Chair On Sunday, December 8, 2013, Electric-Chair (122)By person wrote:

    Something "gone" is better empty

  • Lil Demon Lady On Sunday, December 8, 2013, Lil Demon Lady (39)By person wrote:

    Maybe, but empty is pretty painful too.

  • Dejected_Worth On Sunday, December 8, 2013, Dejected_Worth (84)By person wrote:

    Owwww.. the crushing weight of nothing.. beautifully done

  • Lil Demon Lady On Sunday, December 8, 2013, Lil Demon Lady (39)By person wrote:

    Crushing is a good word for it. lol.

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