Serpent
By Diva_Satanica
As the snake slithers from its dwelling,
her eyes filled with hope, anxiety, and fear.
desolate from the rest of society,
she creeps out into the the open world,
a world chaos, destruction and deceit.
not knowing what lies ahead,
she leaves behind her haven, her sanctuary,
her only true form of comfort, her home.
struggling to become someone, an original,
yet she deems to only become just
a hopeless no one in the face of society.
shedding her skin unveiling a new person,
some one who is shy, manipulant and discreat.
some one who is not her self,
with her past gone she starts over,
getting her self into nothing as she planned,
only these new wonders that help preserve her new persona.
every day is a struggle to stay alive,
to get money for her wonderous addiction.
tired of living the life she has inhabited,
she sheds her skin, eagerly,
after she has lost all hope.
trying, attempting and failing once again.
what good is life if your just another faceless in society.
tired of all the deciet,
destruction and chaos she has delt with,
she slowly, quietly and gladly,
slithers into darkness,
into nothing
into death.
Comments on "Serpent"
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A former member wrote:
HSSSS!!!!
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A former member wrote:
for whom doth the serpent really shed its skin?!?! for her self and beliving her in her own beauty or for the others to aprove the beauty she wants the other to see. dark & and sad words. just as they should be. // thanks.
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A former member wrote:
Dark, mysterious... Yes, I could only like it. Very well done. *Lilith*
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On Friday, September 19, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
Good write, brings out the best in me.......hate....¿
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On Saturday, September 6, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
to be a no one is something i am all to used to being, great write it fits my mood at the moment
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On Sunday, August 31, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
Becoming darker then ever...+Fallen One+
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, Bloody_Hands
(20) wrote:
Good work Diva, the way things are to people in their mind as to everything they perceve. Lovely ~Lynne
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On Saturday, August 23, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Well well well, Miss Diva, this is a splenderific write. Good job you satanic person you.