Jeremy's Emptiness

By Abbyernathie





























a friend of mine wrote this one in Mythology class. if you ask me, it's VERY creative...;) please comment, even if you don't like it or think it's a bit wordy (tee hee). just please comment...:D

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Copyright 2003 Abbyernathie
Published on Friday, August 22, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Friday, October 6, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    wow. excellent use of... imagery? ;)

  • Rebel_Angel On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I remember this one! It was great, can't really argue about the meaning of this one now can we...

  • _Andrew_ On Friday, August 22, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    i like it, seems so... void LoL!! *~*aNDReW*~*

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 22, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    no howabout we go to a feild and abduct aliens and tell them to make a crop circle then run and hide...works for me...teehee

  • Six-Out On Friday, August 22, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Only if I can get the anal probe!

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 22, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    i'm not sure. i think i forgot... i think we're arguing about whether u can write something w/ no words... i lose track easy...lol

  • Six-Out On Friday, August 22, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Oh well, let's get naked and dance, *runs away screaming giddily*

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 22, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    ya. if i can get him to, i'll have him come on and explain it. there's an actual meaning to it...but there isn't supposta be any words...

  • Six-Out On Friday, August 22, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I bet the meaning is that there is nothing inside, therefore it's empty, all I'm saying is...wait, what are we arguing about now?

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 22, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    the whole point is that it's a blank piece of paper...

  • Six-Out On Friday, August 22, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Ok...I got that.

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 22, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    ya. it's called "jeremy's emptiness"!

  • Six-Out On Friday, August 22, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Maybe you should say your friend had the idea or something, but you can't write a blank piece of paper.

  • Six-Out On Friday, August 22, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    You're friend wrote a blank piece of paper?

  • Ophelia On Friday, August 22, 2003, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    duh,,,,,,,,,,

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