The Lookout Tower
By Tadakimacun
Out in West Virginia, near Bluefield, there is an old wooden lookout tower
near the train tracks. The tower was once used to warn Bluefield citizens
of intruders. The post is long since abandoned, but a curious legend has
come to exist about it.
At the times when the world boundaries are thin, it is said a person can
climb up the outpost steps and speak to the dead.
On a night when the moon cannot be seen, climb up the steps and look out
onto the tracks, then say the name of the person you want to speak to.
It could be a lost loved one, a famous person long dead, anyone who has
passed. When you turn away from the view, they will be leaning against
a tall post by the steps, as real as you are.
You can converse with them as much as you like, but do not by any means
attempt to touch or walk past the person. Then they will enfold you in
a cold embrace, and plunge with you down the rotten and broken stairs headfirst,
smiling as you scream and break your neck.
How do I know? My name is Carlotta Bayne.
Come to the tower and ask me.
Comments on "The Lookout Tower"
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On Friday, October 18, 2013, Tadakimacun
(7) wrote:
Thank you for the kind words! I'm a creepypasta fan and have been trying to write my own. I think this one is the best attempt yet.
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A former member wrote:
A very well put together piece here. I especially like the ending it drives home the stories subject very well cheers Craig
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A former member wrote:
Interesting piece, I especially like the closing line. It's the sort of thing that sticks in people's minds, which is precisely what you want.
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On Friday, October 18, 2013, Deadlights
(28) wrote:
Haunting, great work