Barefoot in the Snow

By Abbyernathie

Running around barefoot
in two feet of show.
i just wanna see
how far i can go.

i'm running all ofer.
wow, look at the trails!
i'm starting to slow down,
kuz the coldness prevails.

i can't go any farther,
kuz my feet are so numb.
i turn around to go back,
oh, now i feel dumn.

it seems so much farther
than the distance i ran.
i shoulda thought this through
before i began.

i gotta do it all over,
that's just my luck.
i don't think i can make it.
boy does this suck.

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Published on Monday, August 18, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Barefoot in the Snow"

On Tuesday, June 6, 2006, HalfDarkAngel (59) wrote:

i love how you took a totally random subject and turned it into art. im not really into rhyme but you pulled it off well.
On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

lmao. awesome write ~*~Tart~*~
On Monday, September 1, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156) wrote:

Great Write! Reminds Me Of My Youth... Except Without The Snow. Its Funny Because No Mn We Still Try Different Things. GPhD.
On Thursday, August 21, 2003, _Andrew_ (245) wrote:

blah, startin from scratch again and again is probably the most annoying thing in the world >.
On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Aurora_Light (472) wrote:

hahaha poor u abby was it a hard run? U.P. is right a lesson learned the hard way. nice write
On Monday, August 18, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Ahhh!!! Netspeak....must....run....
A former member wrote: nice! anotheer lesson learned the hard way.that always sucks.U.P.
On Monday, August 18, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

I like this one! I have read it before and it has a nice touch to it! Keep It Up.