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Barefoot in the Snow
By Abbyernathie
Running around barefoot
in two feet of show.
i just wanna see
how far i can go.
i'm running all ofer.
wow, look at the trails!
i'm starting to slow down,
kuz the coldness prevails.
i can't go any farther,
kuz my feet are so numb.
i turn around to go back,
oh, now i feel dumn.
it seems so much farther
than the distance i ran.
i shoulda thought this through
before i began.
i gotta do it all over,
that's just my luck.
i don't think i can make it.
boy does this suck.
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Copyright 2003 Abbyernathie
Published on Monday, August 18, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, June 6, 2006, HalfDarkAngel
(59)
wrote:
i love how you took a totally random subject and turned it into art. im not really into rhyme but you pulled it off well.
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On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
lmao. awesome write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Great Write! Reminds Me Of My Youth... Except Without The Snow. Its Funny Because No Mn We Still Try Different Things. GPhD.
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On Thursday, August 21, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
blah, startin from scratch again and again is probably the most annoying thing in the world >.
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
hahaha poor u abby was it a hard run? U.P. is right a lesson learned the hard way. nice write
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On Monday, August 18, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Ahhh!!! Netspeak....must....run....
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A former member wrote:
nice! anotheer lesson learned the hard way.that always sucks.U.P.
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On Monday, August 18, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I like this one! I have read it before and it has a nice touch to it! Keep It Up.
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