Dream where I fall into dream where I fall where there's a dream

By Dirtylizard

There's a man who laughs so hard
at the write upon the card
he looks at me and laughs this way
creepily as is his way.

serendipitous as if it to broach
In the dark amongst the coach
Here I am and here I'll stay
In this dark forever lay.

There is no grammar in my writing
as all logic I am fighting
In the land between the door.

Then I take you to the rift
where all logic takes a shift and 
amongst the bones you do adore.

giantly I'm screaming in this land that I am dreaming
and I'll take you here and make you see some more.

You notice there are always scissors never scissorers
the man behind the mask he asks me, getting scared.

I gently weep, I'm screaming, and I hope to end this dreaming

And then..... What that is it? Yep Awake now...

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Copyright 2013 Dirtylizard
Published on Tuesday, July 30, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • PoetessDarkly On Thursday, August 1, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    welcome to dark poetry hope you enjoy the darkness. a great start with this post!

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    ...that's an enjoyable little romp thru the veils of your mind, & a kick of an ending...

  • Dirtylizard On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, Dirtylizard (26)By person wrote:

    Thank you I felt the end to this was weird which I, too, like!

  • Devilish On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Awee yes dreams. can be a bitch or be our bitch. hello there you and welcome to darkpoetry,.. roam around and read others as it will bring them back to you . if you eva need anything i'm a click away. Scholar

  • Dirtylizard On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, Dirtylizard (26)By person wrote:

    Thank you I shall! though I am slow to action these days but I am always reading and will comment more often! :D

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    Welcome to DP! Dreams can really be a bitch.. especially when they trick you into thinking you're awake. Nicely done xoxo

  • Dirtylizard On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, Dirtylizard (26)By person wrote:

    Thank you! And I must say I have been enjoying your poems very much since I arrived here.

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