Not Sorry

By Sasha_Revengy

I don't want to look into your eyes.

Could it be because I don't want to
feel what you feel or is it because
I'm scared that I might be the cause
of your sorrows and pain?

I'm not flattered for the most part.
I cause pain, hatred and anger.

Again, I'm not proud, but I'd be
damned if I sell my happiness and
piece of mind short for the failure of
your strength.

Maybe I'm dark. But I'm the only light
I see in that mirror.

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Published on Saturday, May 4, 2013. Filed under: "Reflective" and

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September 5th, 2013

Comments on "Not Sorry"

On Monday, February 25, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

This has a nice optimistic ending. Kind of a moral to the irony expressed. I enjoyed this because of its wit and the courage you had to express yourself. :)
A former member wrote: A true conflict of emotions. I felt the piece really showed the thought process, ending nicely in total clarity.
A former member wrote: Very nice.
On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Void Vortex (298) wrote:

Awesome write, the last line killed, I see it the same way!
On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Sasha_Revengy (46) wrote:

yup, the truth :-) Thank you for the comment.
On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Apsarra (5) wrote:

I love the straight forward flow to your poem. It expresses sensitivity, and a simple honesty that in an admission such as this, is not always easy to pull off. A great piece.
On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Sasha_Revengy (46) wrote:

thank you :-)
On Friday, August 30, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

I like this piece very much, I especially liked the last line as way to tie it up. You have a lot of potential from what I see in your work, definitely keep at it! Ciao, T/S
A former member wrote: As I read your works I'm loving them more. You are talented and great at putting your emotions into what you write.
On Friday, May 31, 2013, Sasha_Revengy (46) wrote:

wow...thank you :-)
A former member wrote: "Maybe I'm dark. But I'm the only light I see in that mirror." that gave me chills. please allow me to say that all your works are greatly enjoyed.
On Friday, May 31, 2013, Sasha_Revengy (46) wrote:

thank you very much :-)
A former member wrote: I really enjoyed this.
On Saturday, May 4, 2013, Sasha_Revengy (46) wrote:

well appreciated :-)