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Not Sorry
By Sasha_Revengy
I don't want to look into your eyes.
Could it be because I don't want to
feel what you feel or is it because
I'm scared that I might be the cause
of your sorrows and pain?
I'm not flattered for the most part.
I cause pain, hatred and anger.
Again, I'm not proud, but I'd be
damned if I sell my happiness and
piece of mind short for the failure of
your strength.
Maybe I'm dark. But I'm the only light
I see in that mirror.
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Copyright 2013 Sasha_Revengy
Published on Saturday, May 4, 2013.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
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On Monday, February 25, 2019, Jonas Robinson
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wrote:
This has a nice optimistic ending. Kind of a moral to the irony expressed. I enjoyed this because of its wit and the courage you had to express yourself. :)
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A former member wrote:
A true conflict of emotions.
I felt the piece really showed the thought process, ending nicely in total clarity.
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A former member wrote:
Very nice.
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On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Void Vortex
(303) wrote:
Awesome write, the last line killed, I see it the same way!
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On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Sasha_Revengy
(48) wrote:
yup, the truth :-) Thank you for the comment.
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On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Apsarra
(5) wrote:
I love the straight forward flow to your poem. It expresses sensitivity, and a simple honesty that in an admission such as this, is not always easy to pull off. A great piece.
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On Thursday, September 5, 2013, Sasha_Revengy
(48) wrote:
thank you :-)
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On Friday, August 30, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I like this piece very much, I especially liked the last line as way to tie it up. You have a lot of potential from what I see in your work, definitely keep at it! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
As I read your works I'm loving them more. You are talented and great at putting your emotions into what you write.
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On Friday, May 31, 2013, Sasha_Revengy
(48) wrote:
wow...thank you :-)
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A former member wrote:
"Maybe I'm dark. But I'm the only light
I see in that mirror." that gave me chills. please allow me to say that all your works are greatly enjoyed.
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On Friday, May 31, 2013, Sasha_Revengy
(48) wrote:
thank you very much :-)
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A former member wrote:
I really enjoyed this.
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On Saturday, May 4, 2013, Sasha_Revengy
(48) wrote:
well appreciated :-)
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