"List your feelings"

By heartbroken psychosis

I felt a


far sweeter than any


that my dreams ever gave me.
In that moment, I was home inside my


I embraced it, because I don't need 




Temporary emotions
don't compare with the pure




The only constant in my life is this


Coming just before this


The two intermingle together;




always the lead.
Love is a



plaything to this


Yet it's what made this


so permanent.

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Copyright 2013 heartbroken psychosis
Published on Sunday, April 28, 2013.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "List"

Author's Note:

9/25/12; an experiment that my therapist recommended with conveying certain feelings I harbor..
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  • Lux On Monday, August 26, 2013, Lux (308)By person wrote:

    Drenched in melancholic sadness, thick like syrup and yet sweet like cherries. I found myself shifting in my seat as I read this, unable to escape images in my head. Works like this really move me, and you did this all too well.

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Saturday, June 22, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (362)By person wrote:

    The format was flawless, beautifully written ♥ xoxo

  • Sasha_Revengy On Saturday, May 4, 2013, Sasha_Revengy (51)By person wrote:

    I loved the format. And I understand how you feel.

  • Devilish On Monday, April 29, 2013, Devilish (2782)By person wrote:

    Mmmmmmm i think i love you. hello there new poet.. welcome to darkpoetry.. i see no faults.. as mine are powerful and offensive. if you eva need anything i'm a click away.. don't hesitate.. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I love the way your spacing is putting emphasis on words, i find it strangthend its power and flow Scholar

  • heartbroken psychosis On Monday, April 29, 2013, heartbroken psychosis (6)By person wrote:

    Ahhh thank you! Your feedback makes me quite happy!

  • A former member wrote: Your madness is intoxicating.

  • Markus Darkscribe On Sunday, April 28, 2013, Markus Darkscribe (72)By person wrote:

    Very good write, Therapy in verse. Helps sometimes.

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