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Orange Moons + Machines
By raspberry89
I
think that I’ve gone crazy, mindless.
I’ve lost sight of myself, i am spineless.
I know no controls, I cannot empathize.
A soul that's long been sold and a heart desensitized.
Blood flows through me cold, my pulse mechanized.
Anger's a thousandfold and every second emphasized.
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Copyright 2013 raspberry89
Published on Monday, April 22, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Orange Moons + Machines"
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On Tuesday, April 23, 2013, FadedBlues
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wrote:
...uncontrollable rage & ultimate confusion in the extreme, as I interpret it...
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A former member wrote:
It is quite a pity, but yet, pulling it out of ourselves to express such emotion often creates a great piece. Good job. I can definitely relate.
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A former member wrote:
This is an absolutely fabulous title for a poem...I came here expecting something much different. I'd like to see a poem about orange moons and machines, what a fascinating concept it could be!
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A former member wrote:
that sounds so pretty but so sad at the same time
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A former member wrote:
The robot who had no heart but wracked by pain, with only the desire to regain what it lost. The poem portrays your struggle vividly, and sadly.
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