lover lost (formerly untitled)

By Silent_Raven

i'm lost here,
isolated
while you laugh
in the gleaming light they toss you
but i still remember
being your forbidden succubus
beloved succubus
in the moonlight.

your eyes,
glowing green embers
rising form the cover of your bedsheets,
beacons travelling up my body.
your arms around me
-i am yours, let it be known-
a sigh brushing my lips.
you crawl up, stealthy cat,
and pounce on me,
your golden godly skin
pressing its weight on my frailty,
your torso in control of all my destiny.
you kiss me,
to win at first, but afterwards
you kiss me to control me
to own me;
you mark your territory well
you seek me out,
your passion-tongue screaming my name,
digging to my soul...

a kiss so passionate, so tender
intoxicating
you drug me with your honey
and i convulse
to the rythm of your body
and i am lost
in the waves your arms travel;
you reach in
to the heart of my being
-touch me-
consume my love for you.

i am melting, melting into you
becoming yours
becoming one
surrendering the physical
to save the supernatural,
and giving you the best
my words can offer.

and now that we are separated
and you walk away unscathed,
i have only these dream souvenirs
to remember.

(this is a work in progress)

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Copyright 2003 Silent_Raven
Published on Sunday, August 10, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wow.. If this is a work in progress, I'd really like to see a completed work...This is wonderful. *Nadia

  • AshtrayDirt On Monday, August 11, 2003, AshtrayDirt (31)By person wrote:

    I dig this. It paints a beautiful picture.

  • Six-Out On Sunday, August 10, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Work in progress? Pssh, that is great. I think it's just fine the way it is. I really like, good job.

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