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Darkness Surrounds
By BlackRobedMage
Darkness surrounds me
I hear the whispers
Of forgotten memories
That once were
Love does not come
For one so dark
One such as I
Whose feelings aren't shown
Feelings left inside
My heart is cold
Light does not come
My soul left untouched
Everything fading
Nothing is left
Once was my heart
Which beats no more
Colors are lost
Nothing around me
Doom has befallen
On one dark soul
Deeper than death
Where shadows won't come
Can not be seen
But darkness surrounds
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Copyright 2003 BlackRobedMage
Published on Thursday, August 7, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Darkness Surrounds"
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On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518)
wrote:
Amazing. You are indeed gifted. I cant wait to see you dwell in other issues, then these in your poems.
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I like this also. I sometimes feel that love will never come to me either.
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On Friday, August 8, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
"love does not come, for one so dark"..an in your face definition of emptiness..pity, one must be so tainted so young..I hope one day your heart can be jump started once again to feel love..it can be amazing...Great Write..I enjoyed it...~Velvet~
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt
(24) wrote:
wow. amazing write. ~ap
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
a poem that seems to speak to some part of me that i didnt know was there. nice job
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, BlackRobedMage
(16) wrote:
Thank you both. I'm happy that you like the poem.
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
Sheer brilliance! A perplex experience expressed so elegibly
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